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		<title>By: Di Francis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Di Francis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2012 03:09:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some risks don&#039;t pay off, that&#039;s for sure. 

You&#039;re from Alabama? Hmmmm. I may be hitting you up for some info for something I&#039;m working on.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some risks don&#8217;t pay off, that&#8217;s for sure. </p>
<p>You&#8217;re from Alabama? Hmmmm. I may be hitting you up for some info for something I&#8217;m working on.</p>
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		<title>By: Di Francis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Di Francis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2012 03:06:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Isn&#039;t that annoying? It was typical of older SF works, but it really drives me up a wall.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Isn&#8217;t that annoying? It was typical of older SF works, but it really drives me up a wall.</p>
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		<title>By: Douglas Meeks</title>
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		<dc:creator>Douglas Meeks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Oct 2012 14:08:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well let me list the ways a writer can ensure I do not finish:

Leave your politics at home, this is entertainment

Don&#039;t insult large portions of the populace (had this happen recently by an indie author who books I like but when she suggested that everyone in Alabama was stupid and married their cousins, well that was the end of the book for me)  I happen to live in Alabama and we have a higher portion of engineers and scientists than most of the country and the Space &amp; Rocket Center is here because this is where most of the mental work was done,  Bottom Line:  Do your research.

Make your characters consistent:  We all change our minds a bit but major personality changes are a killer (check out what happened at the below link for Shadowflame by Diana Sylvan, worst author betrayal of her readers in my history).  Hint:  Most popular review is titled &quot;God, I hated this book&quot;  that means you have really screwed up.  

http://www.amazon.com/Shadowflame-A-Novel-Shadow-World/dp/0441020658/]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well let me list the ways a writer can ensure I do not finish:</p>
<p>Leave your politics at home, this is entertainment</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t insult large portions of the populace (had this happen recently by an indie author who books I like but when she suggested that everyone in Alabama was stupid and married their cousins, well that was the end of the book for me)  I happen to live in Alabama and we have a higher portion of engineers and scientists than most of the country and the Space &amp; Rocket Center is here because this is where most of the mental work was done,  Bottom Line:  Do your research.</p>
<p>Make your characters consistent:  We all change our minds a bit but major personality changes are a killer (check out what happened at the below link for Shadowflame by Diana Sylvan, worst author betrayal of her readers in my history).  Hint:  Most popular review is titled &#8220;God, I hated this book&#8221;  that means you have really screwed up.  </p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Shadowflame-A-Novel-Shadow-World/dp/0441020658/" rel="nofollow">http://www.amazon.com/Shadowflame-A-Novel-Shadow-World/dp/0441020658/</a></p>
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		<title>By: Lynsey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynsey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Sep 2012 07:49:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That&#039;s such a good way to describe it- &quot;As you know Bobish,&quot; lol. I read a book from a new author that told everything like that through the dialogue (or tried to). She had vampires sitting around saying&quot; Well as you know (Bob), our race began a millennia ago when, blah, blah, blah&quot; As if they would sit around saying that to each other!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s such a good way to describe it- &#8220;As you know Bobish,&#8221; lol. I read a book from a new author that told everything like that through the dialogue (or tried to). She had vampires sitting around saying&#8221; Well as you know (Bob), our race began a millennia ago when, blah, blah, blah&#8221; As if they would sit around saying that to each other!</p>
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